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cutenikki14
08-28-2008, 05:10 AM
death, the shadow of life,
for everything born another dies
for some death is an escape
from the pains of life
life and death is like the cycle of the sun and moon
one rises while the other falls
forever chasing each other
day by day
night by night
science can only get you so far
but you can't escape the grasp of death
it will always seek somebody
forever strengthening it's army
until the day the sun refuses to rise
and darkness forever engulfs the world
then we will see life's dangerous secret.

guardianangle
08-28-2008, 11:07 AM
death, the shadow of life,
for everything born another dies
for some death is an escape
from the pains of life
life and death is like the cycle of the sun and moon
one rises while the other falls
forever chasing each other
day by day
night by night
science can only get you so far
but you can't escape the grasp of death
it will always seek somebody
forever strengthening it's army
until the day the sun refuses to rise
and darkness forever engulfs the world
then we will see life's dangerous secret."Then" is unnecessary here.

I like it. It's pretty depressing, but I like it anyway. Thanks for sharing!
Guardianangle

sade008
08-28-2008, 08:17 PM
Its really nice keep writing
Sade x