I sit in my room
The sun is setting
The light is fading
And I'm losing all hope.
I fall into darkness
And I reach for your hand.
But you just smirk
And let me fall.
You leave me alone
In the pits of my soul.
Surrounded by all wrong,
Why are you leaving me
What did I do?
Alone in the dark,
The sorrow within...
Eats me alive, twisting and tearing.
Where has my light gone?
Where is my hope?
Where is my heart?
Buried within all that is dark.
I sit in my room,
Till I see the light...
The sun comes to rise after the night...
That is where I find my hope.
And what I learn
As I sit in my corner...
Is no matter how deep the dark,
There will always be light...

I really would like honest comments for this. If you think it's crap, just say, or if there's something I can improve on let me know. I've ben working on this one for a competition

Its a good to the point poem.

i dont like how you start off falling in the dark,but then coming too light it was too quick it didnt create the effect its suppose to in my opinion:confused:

Ah... yeah. I can see what you mean...

Thank you :)

Your Welcome.

That's a very good poem. I picture someone in a window seal, looking over the city, smoking a pipe.