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BaByPeBbLeS13
10-16-2004, 03:08 AM
As I lie in my bed at night
I sometimes hear your voice,
and I can*t help but wonder
If i made the right choice.

You meant so much to me
But I let you slip away,
now all I want is to have you back
but all I can do is pray.

We had so many fun times
the memories often run through my mind,
but things have changed so very much
it put my heart and life in a bind.

But, now you have HER
the fun times you will share,
I hope you really love her
I hope you really care.

I love you with ALL my heart
and maybe ten times more,
I cannot believe I turned away
and walked right out the door.

You always said, no matter what
that you*d always care,
But now when I need you most
You don*t really seem to be there.

You may not ever read this
But I do want you to know,
that you*ve made an impact on my life
and you have helped me grow.

You*ve made me a stronger person
through good times and the bad,
and I*ll always remember
the fun times that we had.

Your such an awesome person
at least you are to me,
people tell me a lot of horrible things
But they dont see the *BINX* I see.

Maybe onee day we*ll be together again
but if not, we should be friends,
because you are very special to me
and that will never end.

No matter what I*ll always love you
I really hope you know,
But, I have to move on without you
I have to let you go!

this is one of many that i wrote for my ex*boyfriend :'( i still love him to pieces!! Tell me what you think..!

typicalusername
10-16-2004, 11:53 AM
Eh, the rhyming seemed a little forced. And it could've been shorter. Halfway through I loss interest because you were repeating the same things over and that didn't help the poem any. I do like the fact that it was based on actual emotion and that you could tell that the guy meant alot to you.

elg1610
10-16-2004, 03:07 PM
Your such an awesome person
I have to agree. And that line sounded out of place. But I too, like the way you based it on something real to you.

A lot of great poems don't rhyme.