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wakawakka
07-07-2008, 05:02 AM
The darkness of night holds secrets and lies
The ones we try to hide
But when morning comes
Th light opens our eyes
Leaving our secrets out to dry

idomad
07-07-2008, 10:26 PM
The last line seems forced, though I like the idea. Keep writing!
IDOMAD

kryssy123
07-07-2008, 10:35 PM
i like it keep writing