Hey my names Cynthia lol i wrote this one one night while i was sitting on my porch at my old house that i loved so much and while sitting there it started to ran i love the rain just watching it and sometimes even dancing or singing in it too lol and i just came up with this hope you all love it cuz i sure do ok this one is my favorite and i think it might be yours too it's called........


The Angel's Cry
There is always a calmness before the storm
The clouds are all darkened as they form
Thundering skies echo across the land
Untold signs are washed from the sand
It becomes all quiet and not a sound is heard
You can listen for voices but you hear not a word
Then like some magical wonder from above
The angels begin to cry and send down their love
Their tears are falling for you and for me
To touch us all and to set us all free
They send down their love with such beauty and grace
I lift up my head and let the tears touch my face
Washing our souls from the hurt that we feel
Washing our souls form the pain that is real
And when thay have finished their crying all done
Those clouded skies depart to bring out the sun
And if you watch closely and look way up high
You will see a rainbow of colors appear in the sky
Colors of joy that are warm and not cold
God's given promise for us to hold.

This is a really good poem
There are some things you could change so it would flow more smoothly though
"You can listen for voices but you hear not a word"--You listen for voices and hear not a word
"To touch us all and to set us all free"--take out the 2nd all
"I lift up my head and let the tears touch my face"--instead of and let, use as the
These are only suggestions you don't have to use them :usa:

Beautiful.

Hello BabyGirl3907,

you are a good writter, your poem was a nice piece