Silent candles

The soft glowing light
surrounded the room
I had no knowledge of whats next
but it would happen soon

I sat there and waited
watch the candle dance
as we all sat
the silence took its chance

I just sat still
worring..
wondering
a scary feel

soon the silence broke
and all i could do was listen
and watch the sweet scented
candle glisten

his words in metophor
I tried to understand
what was he saying
the fire blew from the fan

the silence sweeping in
again
the candles just blew
I just sat not knowing what to do

the silence broke again
I hadnt said a word
I was listening to everyword
each ear had ever heard

It felt unfinished
what should i have said
the candle spoke for me
as i went off to bed


(idk i got bored?? lol and sorry for spellng)

I like it. Though, feel... feeling? Thanks for sharing!

it was good but i think their should have been more

i really like the metophor! and your avatar!:flower: