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number1_freak
05-24-2008, 07:12 AM
Is It Me?

we had our little fights
but i thought i did u right
maybe it was just me......
i kept u at my side
cuz i thought thats where you wanted to be
but maybe it was just me....
i gave you all my trust and love
and thought u gave me the same
but maybe it was just me...
everything i said was true
i had no lies to tell to u
and thought you had none for me
but maybe it was just me....
now were slowly separating
not caring wat each other is saying
is it because of me?
____________________________________________

It came so unexpectedly
Just one random day
Thinking nothing good was coming my way
I cant remember why or how
But I don’t regret what happened
The day I met you
One of the best things that could happen
So hopefully we’ll become good friends
And it will stay that way forever
We’d laugh, cry, and share all joy
Just you and me, each other.

______________________________________

I’m not where I’ suppose to be
and neither is my heart
My mind is wondering around you now my furthest thought
My body that was once only for you
You now share with someone else
Even though he's what makes me happy
I cannot help but feel sad
To know that you love me and
consider me your better half
But yet I have lied, cheated
and stolen your time
By making you think I felt the same
I love you, But love him more
No apology can cover what I’ve done
and what I’m saying
But I’ve tried my best
and said the truth
So we can go our separate ways

ekat101
05-24-2008, 12:48 PM
Is It Me?

we had our little fights
but i thought i did u right
maybe it was just me......
i kept u at my side
cuz i thought thats where you wanted to be
but maybe it was just me....
i gave you all my trust and love
and thought u gave me the same
but maybe it was just me...
everything i said was true
i had no lies to tell to u
and thought you had none for me
but maybe it was just me....
now were slowly separating
not caring wat each other is saying
is it because of me?
____________________________________________

It came so unexpectedly
Just one random day
Thinking nothing good was coming my way
I cant remember why or how
But I don’t regret what happened
The day I met you
One of the best things that could happen
So hopefully we’ll become good friends
And it will stay that way forever
We’d laugh, cry, and share all joy
Just you and me, each other.

______________________________________

I’m not where I’ suppose to be
and neither is my heart
My mind is wondering around you now my furthest thought
My body that was once only for you
You now share with someone else
Even though he's what makes me happy
I cannot help but feel sad
To know that you love me and
consider me your better half
But yet I have lied, cheated
and stolen your time
By making you think I felt the same
I love you, But love him more
No apology can cover what I’ve done
and what I’m saying
But I’ve tried my best
and said the truth
So we can go our separate ways

very good!! lol

cruelvampire
05-24-2008, 11:17 PM
Your poetry is very honest and beautiful.

I loved the third poem, but I wonder if the girl I once loved would apologize that way for what she did to me.

Lucky_myspacewhore
05-25-2008, 01:45 AM
These poems are great. They have so much passion and feeling its life they are alive and the reader (me) can feel the same emotions as you felt. I am a writer also. I really think u have talent. Keep it up.