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zuly92
05-23-2008, 06:20 PM
this is a song i wrote just now..
i kno spellin aint gud.
cldnt give a shyt for you fukers
who like to point dat out.
so here it is, tell me wat u think

"you can laugh about it cause i sure am"


may 23

by zuly- me






its all comin together now
all the questions you asked
it didnt seem okay
i left you to forget you
but i took you back
thinking things have changed

but you've gone
done it this time
my heart feels like its going to die
and im soaked from all
the emotional discharge
i wont be getting sleep tonite

what hurts
is that you sit there
then you dish out words
that mean alot to me
then you say it to her
you dont seem worth fighting for
anymore
anymore
what really hurts
is the things i do for you
i've never done or do
for anyone else
you are
not who i thought you were
or maybe you are
thats why it hurts

your really just afraid
you'll end up alone
you want to catch me right handed
so you can get up and go
and its all good with you
you got her to lean on
soon she will realize
why you and me didnt last long

its true i am stupid
to love you still with everything
yea its true
even cupid
makes mistakes
i stayed aound
for what
im on the ground
again
what will you say this time
i dont really care save it

oh yeah
you've gone
done it this time
your apology was
sorry i hurt you
im sorry too
so sorry i met you
so sorry i let you
be everything to me

what hurts
is that you sit there
then you dish out words
that mean alot to me
then you say it to her
its your daily routine

im one to jump to conclusions
but i've heard it all before
god you just dont seem
worth fighting for
anymore
you just dont seem
worth crying for
anymore

what really hurts
is the things i do for you
i've never done or do
for anyone else
you are
not who i thought you were
or maybe you are
thats why it hurts

leandrasmiles
05-24-2008, 12:14 AM
cut out the word discharge or change it pleeeeas. i think you should label where verses adn chorus is
besides that though
i really like it! i like the way u feel in this poem, it seems down to earth like you are just leveling with us, i like the flow! eek just lovely