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~LoneWolf~
09-18-2004, 12:53 PM
A distinct scent of lilac flowers,
Wisping fumes from the lit candle;
Slithering slowly through the senses,
Intimately tranquilizes a tempest mind.
Suppressed memories smothered,
Elapsed, withering with the flame.
The reaped dreams and implications,
All of it, gradually draining away.
The movement of tender sinuous lips,
Kissing, dribbling the fear away.
Slaughter this instability it’s depleting,
Cure me with your unkempt love.

~LoneWolf~
09-18-2004, 06:23 PM
Comment please.

DeadTears
09-19-2004, 10:59 AM
Nice poem, I am working on one as well.

buttrflykisses06
09-19-2004, 11:25 AM
that was really nice. beautiful. just out of curiousity whered you come up with the idea.. it was really creative.

~LoneWolf~
09-19-2004, 04:40 PM
Yeah, well. I'm mentally unstable and my bf says he'd help me through it. I thought up of the poem about a certain moment.

ZeppelinKitty
09-19-2004, 11:32 PM
Not bad. I liked that one.

Mentally unstable, eh?

SexiLexi
09-19-2004, 11:54 PM
I like it, Like all of your poems

~LoneWolf~
09-20-2004, 02:21 PM
:D Yay~!

origamikitty
09-20-2004, 06:07 PM
Wow, nice imagery :)