This poem was inspired by the guy I have a crush on

The Only Place
By: Angel (the hopeless romantic)

The only place my mind has ever been,
is to the thought of you.
So hard to address the issue
But, when I see your face I grin.
I'm so perplexed at these strong emotions,
that it's just another typical notion.
I can't explain this extradinary feeling
To the eyes other people it's *****,
of when I dream of calling you dear.
Yet my heart just keeps on yielding.
The only place my mind has ever been,
Is to the thought of you.

The only good my eyes has ever witness,
is to the image of you.
Looking at me, leaving my heart with no clue
seeing your eyes I can't over come my shyness
You're just 100% perfection
And I have a 100% affection.
You walk alone calm and mellow
O, but how your looks deceive me,
Harmless and cute you are a bumble bee
But how you feel for me is shallow
The only good my eyes has ever witness
is to the image of you.

I try to comprehend,
The desire for you to love me back
but it seems that there something I lack
Maybe it's not your heart I'll win
but a friendship till the end

The only place my mind has ever been
is to the thought of you.



So what do you all think.

it was so good!

thanx

Widunno.

"The only good my eyes has ever witness"

Has should be have. And I think it should be witnesssed.

It's pretty good. =)