mystorytestprofile
03-26-2008, 09:20 PM
ah yes, fragments.
to busy focusing on everything else to remember. thank you!
oh yeah, erased the story here, cause i got what i needed. sorry!
Elfwine
03-26-2008, 09:22 PM
There are far too many fragments for this read to be enjoyable.
faelynne130
03-26-2008, 09:30 PM
^ i agree.
but otherwise it was okay i guess.
Elfwine
03-26-2008, 09:35 PM
ah yes, fragments.
to busy focusing on everything else to remember. thank you!
oh yeah, erased the story here, cause i got what i needed. sorry!
It's quite all right (and a common mistake, to be sure). I actually liked the angle of the story thus far; aside from my grammatical peevishness, that is.