hey, here's a new case/sitting quiet to save face/we delay peace only to promote hate/well, we're too late/we've already sealed our fate/all we've got to preach is the violence that we procreate/hey, it's okay/things will still go our way/no matter what we fuck up now, there's always a new day/but why do we let capitalism thrive and people pay?/why do we say we're safe but more are dying everyday?/and why is it okay that people are being silenced if they won't obey?/no way, i won't let this happen/i'll vote for george bush before i think to quit my rappin/because that's what i do, no matter what's right and what's wrong/no, i'm not going to fit in just to belong/no, i'm not going to keep quiet and stop my song/i hope you all know that adherance is not being strong/it's being safe, and i won't take it/it's making me irate/that laws are only meant for us to break/wake up, smell the coffee, you fucking ingrate/our drug policy keeps us in jail while we're fucking straight/the war in iraq is droppin bombs on innocent people/while we're stuck collecting meal stamps during political upheaval/it's evil that we feel the effects/of a war that doesn't make sense, while we're stuck defenseless/well, fuck defenseless, i'm not quite done yet/how about STDs screwing over teenagers having sex?/it's hanging on our heads, and breaking our necks/the president is just too scared to get serious/well wake up, motherfucker, stop being delirious/it's time to be imperious, time to stand up and say something/stop being silent, don't be afraid to say the wrong thing/it's your time, get involved, don't be scared/or else what do we got left? no. nothing. nowhere.

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I cant even read it....too large of a paragraph/blob. Hit enter a few times, then I'll be able to concentrate.

hey, here's a new case/
sitting quiet to save face/
we delay peace only to promote hate/
well, we're too late/
we've already sealed our fate/
all we've got to preach is the violence that we procreate/
hey, it's okay/
things will still go our way/
no matter what we fuck up now, there's always a new day/
but why do we let capitalism thrive and people pay?/
why do we say we're safe but more are dying everyday?/
and why is it okay that people are being silenced if they won't obey?/
no way, i won't let this happen/
i'll vote for george bush before i think to quit my rappin/
because that's what i do, no matter what's right and what's wrong/
no, i'm not going to fit in just to belong/
no, i'm not going to keep quiet and stop my song/
i hope you all know that adherance is not being strong/
it's being safe, and i won't take it/
it's making me irate/
that laws are only meant for us to break/
wake up, smell the coffee, you fucking ingrate/
our drug policy keeps us in jail while we're fucking straight/
the war in iraq is droppin bombs on innocent people/
while we're stuck collecting meal stamps during political upheaval/
it's evil that we feel the effects/
of a war that doesn't make sense, while we're stuck defenseless/
well, fuck defenseless, i'm not quite done yet/
how about STDs screwing over teenagers having sex?/
it's hanging on our heads, and breaking our necks/
the president is just too scared to get serious/
well wake up, motherfucker, stop being delirious/
it's time to be imperious, time to stand up and say something/
stop being silent, don't be afraid to say the wrong thing/
it's your time, get involved, don't be scared/
or else what do we got left? no. nothing. nowhere.

better?

xxx

Wow...that was.....well.....interesting....

I think that's fantastic. It's really, really good and I don't see what could possibly be wrong with it.

I actually liked that Heather.

Nice flow.

better?

xxx

Much better, thanks :) I can never read huge paragraphs like that.

Originally posted by .punktuation.
the president is just too scared to get serious/

More like too stupid.
I really liked that! And I'm really not a fan of rap...at all. But, that was good. Very poignant. Very blatant. Very excellent.

A+!