The feel of your fingers
The smell of your hair
To admit that I miss you
Well I wouldnt dare

You left me Broken
Broken and Betrayed
did you lie when you told me you loved me?
Or are you just acting afraid

How on earth could I miss you
After all the horrible things you did
How can I trust this feeling
After all the lies ive been fed

But I still will always miss that smile
That sent electric shocks up and down my spine
And maybe if I close my eyes
Ill remember those times you were mine

This is great ! I feel exactly like that, because me and my xbf broke up a little while ago

thats really very good

I LOVE it
Your great at expressing feelings.

hey douchebag.

you are supposed to put multiple poems into one thread and not flood the fucking forums.

alright.

ok now im a fan of ur work.love it!!

Try a new rhyme scheme!! Or don't rhyme at all!! Coz after reading 3 of your works, which are good on their own, the whole abcbabcbabcbabcb starts to nag a little.

kinda average. i dont feel the same as people who've commented (apart from maybe goodguy lol)
it's alright, but really boring. i'd hate to write an essay or something about it, it would be about 2 para's long.
but it's an okay start.

pretty good. relatable.
<3