Hypo
08-16-2004, 10:53 AM
Not a very good poem but I wrote it when I was upset.
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I really want to tell you
What would you say? What would you do?
I want you to know, I want you to feel
I want people to see, that this is real
I don't want to lose you
I want to be with you
But not as a friend
Though I don't want that to end
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Like I said, not a very good piece but please tell me what you all thought. Be honest, liars wont help me improve
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I really want to tell you
What would you say? What would you do?
I want you to know, I want you to feel
I want people to see, that this is real
I don't want to lose you
I want to be with you
But not as a friend
Though I don't want that to end
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Like I said, not a very good piece but please tell me what you all thought. Be honest, liars wont help me improve