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Hypo
08-16-2004, 10:53 AM
Not a very good poem but I wrote it when I was upset.

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I really want to tell you
What would you say? What would you do?

I want you to know, I want you to feel
I want people to see, that this is real

I don't want to lose you
I want to be with you

But not as a friend
Though I don't want that to end

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Like I said, not a very good piece but please tell me what you all thought. Be honest, liars wont help me improve

buttrflykisses06
08-18-2004, 12:06 PM
aww, i thought it was really good.

Sweetsista_69
08-20-2004, 02:31 AM
i thought it was really good too

Dead Flowers
08-20-2004, 02:46 AM
I thought it was ok.