Hypo
08-16-2004, 10:51 AM
When I see you
I want to be you
I want to free you
To help you
You know I know
You told me, remember?
I said I wouldn't tell anyone
I havent, But
When I see you
I want to be you
To free you
From your pain
Today you didn't look at me
Or talk to me
But you thought of me
I'm sure
I think of you
I think all the time now
How much you must hurt
Out and inside
How could he have done that?
A poor defenseless girl
But worse than that.
HIS girl
A spur of the moment thing, I'm sure
Didn't think of what it would do, to you
He did this, HIM
Not you, it's not your fault
Don't do this
Don't hurt yourself
Don't waste yourself
Don't end yourself
You're better than this
I know
You'll get through this.
I hope
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I wrote this and it was the same inspiration as 'Head VS Heart. Who always wins?!' I wrote this one first and if you have read both then I'm sure you can see the change in the space of a day.
Thanks for taking time to reads this poem.
I wanted to have it saying 'Whe I, When I, When I' every second verse/stanza but I couldn't so this has to do.
All critisism is welcome.
I want to be you
I want to free you
To help you
You know I know
You told me, remember?
I said I wouldn't tell anyone
I havent, But
When I see you
I want to be you
To free you
From your pain
Today you didn't look at me
Or talk to me
But you thought of me
I'm sure
I think of you
I think all the time now
How much you must hurt
Out and inside
How could he have done that?
A poor defenseless girl
But worse than that.
HIS girl
A spur of the moment thing, I'm sure
Didn't think of what it would do, to you
He did this, HIM
Not you, it's not your fault
Don't do this
Don't hurt yourself
Don't waste yourself
Don't end yourself
You're better than this
I know
You'll get through this.
I hope
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I wrote this and it was the same inspiration as 'Head VS Heart. Who always wins?!' I wrote this one first and if you have read both then I'm sure you can see the change in the space of a day.
Thanks for taking time to reads this poem.
I wanted to have it saying 'Whe I, When I, When I' every second verse/stanza but I couldn't so this has to do.
All critisism is welcome.