Hypo
08-16-2004, 10:45 AM
Endless days,
Without you,
Hurts my heart,
Makes me blue.
All the times,
That I've cried,
All this wastin',
It's all inside.
And I feel,
All this pain,
I stuffed it down,
But it's back again.
And I lie here in bed,
All alone, and,
I can't fail to notice,
That I'm on the outside,
And I'm lookin' in,
And for me,
You never really have time.
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Ok, this is supposed to be read with the first 3 stanza's rhyming, then the last one is sort of a conclusion so it's just read normally.
Opinions, any??
Without you,
Hurts my heart,
Makes me blue.
All the times,
That I've cried,
All this wastin',
It's all inside.
And I feel,
All this pain,
I stuffed it down,
But it's back again.
And I lie here in bed,
All alone, and,
I can't fail to notice,
That I'm on the outside,
And I'm lookin' in,
And for me,
You never really have time.
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Ok, this is supposed to be read with the first 3 stanza's rhyming, then the last one is sort of a conclusion so it's just read normally.
Opinions, any??