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~LoneWolf~
08-02-2004, 12:22 PM
With butterfly wings
My heart soars
And touches the sky.
A slipped smile,
A healed heart
craddling in my chest.
The world freezes
When you've fallen,
Chest feels tighter,
Sometimes I can't breathe.
Is what I feel wrong?
If it is,
Then I rather be wrong.
Without you here,
Without these feelings,
Then lifes not worth it anymore.
You understand me,
You found my smile,
Its hard not to laugh.
See the world through
A grain of sand,
You'll understand what I see,
Nothing is impossible,
Everything is in reach.
Can I love you?
Though your far, I'll reach.

~LoneWolf~
08-02-2004, 04:21 PM
:(

Shibby_Timmy
08-02-2004, 06:26 PM
awww! i loved it

mezmorizedx
08-03-2004, 01:54 AM
i loved it too.. ur soo talented

Dead Flowers
08-03-2004, 04:24 AM
It is touching.

pinkstripemodel
08-03-2004, 05:51 AM
that was great.. it was real

Alexia
08-03-2004, 09:34 AM
It seemed to be real, and it was touching.

2006ZavalaChic
08-03-2004, 12:11 PM
i loved the ending. it was written very well like always. :)