kinda short but tell me what you think!!!! critsicum is welcome highly :)

DATE RAPE
she trusted him
but he stole everything from her
it happens to other girls
she said "how sad!she said poor girl."
but now that it is her its so much more
he took her childhood ,her heart ,and her laugh
he'll never know the nightmires
but she'll make the day he met her
the day he will regret
hate burns a hole through her heart
and trust will never again come easy

it doesnt read easy.
she said "how sad! poor girl."
but now that it is her its so much more
that part i liked best.
I think it may sound better if laugh turns to laughter. people to girls. I dont know what else. but idea behind it is good.

kt hanx

i loved it.

that was touching.. full of emotion i rekon.. great!

It was from Degrassi. So therefore, it is not your original work, so therefore, you should not take the credit for it.

Sweet Catastrophe... i love degrassi.. its my fav. show... lol just to let you know. =). . oh yea.. Sweet is right.... now that i look back at the poem.. it is from degrassi..

I sirt of liked it! By the way i luv your avatar! Where did u get it from?

Originally posted by Sweet Catastrophe
It was from Degrassi. So therefore, it is not your original work, so therefore, you should not take the credit for it.
is degrassi a tv show ?sry i dont have cable(gay parents) if it is a cable channel

Originally posted by forever fading
is degrassi a tv show ?sry i dont have cable(gay parents) if it is a cable channel

Yes, it is. But that doesn't matter. You plagorized this plain and simple.

uh how ?sry but i couldnt have i have never seen it ! seriosuly belive me! i have never plagurized in my life

Two people have said that poem was on a tv show, which means since you "claim" not to have tv, you found it while browsing on the internet.

but i havent heard of degrassi before ! and y would i playgurisze and put it here u could look at all my other poems none r playgurized ! i swear i didnt

sry if i am not spelling playgurized right

Well, you aren't spelling p-l-a-g-o-r-i-z-e-d right. You claim to not have tv, yet your poem is exactly like the one on tv, and what are the chances of someone's poem being so similar?

Originally posted by mezmorizedx
Sweet Catastrophe... i love degrassi.. its my fav. show... lol just to let you know. =). . oh yea.. Sweet is right.... now that i look back at the poem.. it is from degrassi..

It is my favorite show as well :)

OK that was just lame.

Originally posted by Sweet Catastrophe
It was from Degrassi. So therefore, it is not your original work, so therefore, you should not take the credit for it.

Also, it sucked. :)

Yea, it was. I love Degrassi.

Haha ...

Originally posted by Sweet Catastrophe
It was from Degrassi. So therefore, it is not your original work, so therefore, you should not take the credit for it.

i knew it sounded extremely familiar... and Degrassi is a great show...

k well one of u get the lyrics from the peom from degrassi

it happens to other people
you say how sad
u say poor thing
but when it's u it's something else
it's everything
u'll never no the nightmires
u'll never know th epain you caused
u'll never see the scars u left
the things u stole
and everythign i lost
you took my body tore it in half
u took my child hood my heart and my laugh
u took everything i kept for my self
now ur gone i am not ur poor thing

those are the real lyrics to pms (from degrassi) "poor thing"

thank you!!