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IxfadedmemoryxI
07-21-2004, 07:21 PM
I made this a while ago..jus thought i post it....

Blue

I'm tired of being blue.
Where's the red, the orange,
all those bright colors I used to see?
From inside these four walls,
that somewhat keep me safe,
I can hear what goes on outside.
My insides turn cold,
when I realize how low our flag
is standing.
They hide it from me.
Saying everything's okay,
but I know i will soon be my turn
to perish.
If I could see those bright colors again,
I wouldn't have to die blue.

Liam
07-23-2004, 01:42 AM
i like it made me feel :(

*_myfootrocks_*
07-23-2004, 02:13 AM
that was fun, and i cant honestly say it made me feel pretty, with all the color and whatnot. But on a serious note, i enjoyed it, ive never thought of that, its very creative. I think it would be cool if you could lengthen it and make it include all the colors and what their meaning would be.

2006ZavalaChic
07-23-2004, 10:47 AM
it was different. but really good.