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nvermind93k
07-21-2004, 02:42 PM
to be faced with such longing is torturous
even moreso to see the look of indifference on your face
familiarity enfolds you and you forget everything
well i’m not so lucky, as i obviously portray
words once spoken are missing
from the recent array of hope
and while i collect each sorrow spinning memory
in the bursting jar that is my heart
no one notices a leak in my sanity.
each minute that ticks by
is one more minute away from what once was
and that’s where i want to be
where everything just stops
and lack of memory will come to me
as simply as it does you.

TroubleMaker09
07-22-2004, 12:23 AM
It was ok. I like the end.

2006ZavalaChic
07-28-2004, 09:52 AM
I thought it was wrote well. and I also liked the ending. :)