out of nothing came
a
string
God made a string
out
of
me

who got the string?
God?

neon lights
commercials
whisper in my ear
constantly
people
glossy magazines,
newspapers, ADS,
and screens.

i was let down and turned around,
to the left and to right and front and back
and generally conducted
by something.
something had the string.

God let me down

Wtf?

its a poem about existential problems in today's post-modern world

Yeah okay.

laura,
you
and hate
compose yourself

a force
against me

There are plenty of worse poems to mock. I am puzzled as to why you'd choose mine.

WTF?

Wtf about wtf?

hahaha Laura, you made my day.

I feel special.

hehehe better feel it!

x] You hate me don't you

no laura! jeez, where did you get that idea.

i wrote a crappy poem that made no sense in 5 seconds and you said "WTF?" to it, how could I be mad?

lets be friends!

I don't know. Maybe if I thought just a little bit more I could actually understand it.
Wait no, that requires too much effort.
My apologies.

no laura, hahaha, its fine.

go read the peace treaty i wrote for us!