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Phreak
07-03-2004, 07:04 PM
I'm silently dying for you.
I'm washing away all the hate inside.
I'm willingly defying myself.
I've hurt my heart, my soul, and my pride.

Love is a devilish enemy.
It makes you believe things that aren't real.
You've hurt me enough and now I see.
That my true self was not to your appeal.

I'm purposely buying into your game.
My soul is demolished because of you.
You're selfishly eyeing your shot at fame.
So once and for all, I'm thru.

Tell Meggie what you think. :)

Flirting With Suicide
07-03-2004, 07:33 PM
it was okay.

I really don't like rhyme poems. But the beat of it was okay

Phreak
07-03-2004, 09:06 PM
eh. I don't have enough emotion to write uhm.. un-rhyming poems.

Behelit
07-03-2004, 09:08 PM
>.>;

I like. I like. w00t w00t.

Flirting With Suicide
07-03-2004, 09:09 PM
heh, it takes me 5-10 minutes to right a poem, and I'm not thinking if it goes or whatever really.

Flirting With Suicide
07-03-2004, 09:09 PM
Originally posted by Behelit
>.>;

I like. I like. w00t w00t.

*in a mocking voice*you like everything she does.

:reading:

Phreak
07-03-2004, 09:10 PM
I'm too perfectionist type to do that.

Flirting With Suicide
07-03-2004, 09:14 PM
right. I'm not a perfectionist type. I can just do that.

and poetry is art. its never perfect or finished.

Phreak
07-03-2004, 10:40 PM
I know that... but... I dunno, If I don't like it I throw it away, and I'm learning that that's a mistake. I usually just put all my poems in my notebook and keep it hidden.


teehee I'll never te~el.

Flirting With Suicide
07-03-2004, 10:46 PM
some of the worst poetry ends up being the best.

Phreak
07-03-2004, 10:52 PM
Heh.