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:x:Amaranth:x:
07-03-2004, 04:03 PM
I love the way I hate you
Its a beautiful decline
Of the way I feel
And the way you hurt my mind

Lo, you wish to sway me
I cannot be shook
You carry around your bible
And use it as a sinful hook

I don't care if your tears are falling
I don't care if the truth is dawning
I don't care if your hurt and alone

You'll find no relief in my bitter tone
Does the guilt wash over you
The way it is intended?
You can't read between these lines
I'm talking loud and clear
You won't break the silence
Because your afraid of what you'll hear
You'll continue being "right"
For the rest of your life

I love the way I hate you
Its a beautiful decline
Of the way I feel
And the way you hurt my mind

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Not my best work, but please tell me if you liked it or not. Also, the "I love the way I hate you
Its a beautiful decline
Of the way I feel
And the way you hurt my mind" part sounds weird to me, does anyone have any suggestions?

x_TIA
07-03-2004, 04:25 PM
Eh, I liked it. (but I'm far from being a poet, so I can't really give you anything to improve on)

DemonicGothAngel
07-03-2004, 09:30 PM
I liked it :)