i was in my math class about two weeks ago when i wrote this i think..... what do you think? good bad?


And she looks as if nothing could break her
Sitting in the green grass soaking up the sun
With her pearls wrapped around her and her big sunglasses on
The true essence of beauty on a summers day

The wind is lightly blowing, right through the trees
She sits unmoved, untouched for everyone to see

She has never looked as beautiful as she does now
With her long wavy hair that sits still along her perfect skin
There are no bruises or scrapes, perfection at its best
But no one cares to notice the rest

Inside she is screaming as her thoughts bottled up run wild
Her veins coursing with envy and agonizing pain
Her breath smells of cigarettes and cheap champaine
Her heat is bruised and beaten from the past,
Her memories of what she thought once was, now make her fall apart

Perfection on the outside holds a beautifully broken heart

anyone no?? i would love to get some imput! please?

I loved it,it completely describes how i feel inside.....i get so frustrated that i could be hurting so badly and no one notices.:pink: :( :cry:

I loved it! I think it's awesome. I love this line

[ Perfection on the outside holds a beautifully broken heart ]

I think it's so true!! Absolutely awesome

thanks :]] anyone else?