Ok so I was really bored at 3 in the morning so I decided to write because that is what I do when im bored. So please comment even if it is bad. Its a song *for now. lol* The tune is a tiny bit like "What you need" off of instant star.

I sit there watching as you walk away
I try to not let you see the pain im in
Why don't I get what I deserve
I must have missed something

(Chorus)

But why did I give you all of me
And get absolutely nothing in return
Your what I need
And she's what you want
Im still standing here waiting for you to open your eyes
But your still blind

(End of chorus)

You put your curse on me
Let me out of it
I am tired of trying for something you will never give me
I still want you
I still need you
I still cry your name out in the dark
But m not the girl you want
Its her
Take her
Go ahead and break me
But you should know
She will never love you like I do
Its too bad that you still won't listen to me
Still won't answer my questions

(Chorus)

But why did I give you all of me
And get absolutely nothing in return
Your what I need
And she's what you want
Im still standing here waiting for you to open your eyes
But your still blind

(End of chorus)

Oooooooh. Oooooh. Oooooh

Why should I even care about you
Its not like you care about me
Im not even going to try anymore
Not going to try and make you see
Whats right in front of you
Like your clearly in front of me
Its a shame
Your so blind
And am so tired

That is the first song I have ever written so give me a break. I am not sure what to name it. Hmm well anyway comment. Oh and please don't steal it from me. I don't want to find this song on mtv on the countdown. lol

Don't worry, I'm pretty sure no one's gonna steal your song.

Your song just sounds so fake, and unbelievably generic.