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kaysee16
04-21-2007, 07:22 PM
her (just dont give a shit anymore)
many things in my life make me sad
but you are the reason my life is so bad
how could i hurt you
i loved you so much (atleast i thought i did)
but in the end it was all my fault
how could i say how much i cared (for you)
we were a forbidden love that will never be
i was so shaken
on that day of hate
my will for love died that day
thank you for teaching me
what my life is really to be
an endless toil for meaning
and three realities<never lovebr>never hate
and question everything
im sorry

transparent_hallucination
04-21-2007, 07:26 PM
nice poem, but i think it goes in the literature and poems,section.

Missez_Valo
04-21-2007, 07:30 PM
wow nice poem, really good. but wrong sectionn :P

Luz108
04-21-2007, 09:01 PM
I give it a fail.

BlindWillieMctell
04-21-2007, 09:31 PM
not a very good poem at all