tell me what you think..

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What is this? Is it life? Is it strife? The blade of a knife couldn't cut the bind between the Myan walls and the end of time. What is this? Life? Strife? What is this? I want to know where to go in the end of time. This is mine. It is my life. It is my strife. My knife has ripped your soul in two. Me and you will never be together. Ever.
-Cori Taylor

If you break up the paragraph into a more pleasing form to look at, you'll get a better reader response to your message. Try breaking it up into more lines. Let the shape of your work reflect the actual words. Two other things. I have no Idea what your talking about and "Myans" has an "a" between the "M" and the "y"

it was an ancient civilization.... it's said that they were so "advanced" that not even the blade of a knife could fit between the rocks in which their walls were made.. it's actually kinda cool. sorry i suck, btw, and thanks for commenting..