Tears:cry:
By: rachael (me)


What are tears?
Are they the things that fall from your eyes?
If they are then I have them a lot
What’s the reason I have tears you ask?
Its because of you
I cry every night hoping
You would come back to me
To love me
And mean it
And not to hurt me
And break my heart
I hurt my self every night because of you
Look what your doing to me
I wish you were here to see what your doing to me
I need you
I love you
I wish you could just see the tears
On my face because
Of you.

i think it needs some work

ok then can u help me to make it perfect?

erm... you do that.
:slap:

enter the poetry contest.

what poetry contest?

ok then can u help me to make it perfect?


well i think in this case you should make it rhym. I mean your end words. Keep the first line tho i think thats a good starter.