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He knows that i exist
that you could of guessed
I blame him for the scars hidden on my wrist
and the reason I'm so stressed.

HE pushes the knife deeper,
HE watches my blood pour
some might say HE's the Grim Reaper,
its something HE choses to Ignore.

HE is the reason that I bleed,
HE belongs in Hell
although HE is someone i need
I should say farwell.

HE took my last breath,
as HE walked out the door.
HE's going to be the cause of my death
and all the blood on the floor.

HE knows that I exist,
the only question is does HE care?
here is the final twist,
HE is always there.

the idea is cliche, and the capitalized 'he' is rather annoying, but its not THAT bad

it was interesting. im going to have it stuck in my head

i liked it excellent work

I LIKED IT!!!!!HAVE ENY MORE?????

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.HE pushes the knife deeper,
HE watches my blood pour
some might say HE's the Grim Reaper,
its something HE choses to Ignore.
It should be he 'chose' to ignore. It is well written though.
Summer hamori