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Venus_and_Adonis
01-23-2007, 07:25 AM
Yes the last two lines are a homage to a Billy Bragg song.

Glistening lights in a charcoal sky;
Have painted my fingers black
Nicotine fills my blood and I realise;
There is beauty in death
The blackened hand holding my cigarette smiles
As energy from my nuclear reaction explodes, dead all around
Beauty was born and then there was life…
Wishing upon shooting death and aeroplanes
It seems so wrong to wish on space hardware
How I wish, I wish, I cared.

chinadoll23
01-23-2007, 10:18 AM
interesting

morbidpeace
01-23-2007, 05:27 PM
i like it!!

HateSnake
01-24-2007, 01:14 AM
Repost this in 10 years when gothic themes and abstruse technological allusions will no longer be banal. Then you'll have a winner.

Venus_and_Adonis
01-24-2007, 05:21 PM
Repost this in 10 years when gothic themes and abstruse technological allusions will no longer be banal. Then you'll have a winner.

I wouldn't describe it as having gothic themes.
But I suppose it's designed to create different images for everybody.

false_revolution
01-24-2007, 05:44 PM
I really like it. Excellent imagery =]