You're stupid, you know that?
Calling me nothing but trash
You won't look below my surface
And I'd love to kick your ass

You call me a freak
Thinking it'd make me burst
But guess what? You're normal
And you know what? That's worse

I smile when you critize me
But don't you dare pick a fight
My hatred for you seeps deep
Don't get close to me, I'll bite

You call me weird
Like I don't belong
But I'll survive, bitch
Unlike you, I'm strong

My independence runs deep
And your words will never sting
Don't run away from me now
There's still hell to bring

What, I shouldn't have an opinion?
I'm not suppose to speak my mind?
Just because I'm a little bit different
That evaporates your ability to be kind?

You shouldn't judge people so fast
You don't know what it's like
Insane fucked up people
Always trying to pick a fight

You know what, I don't care
I'm still going to be me
I'm not living in your world
Your standards mean nothing to me

I don't want to be normal
Never did, never will
People say I'm crazy
But I don't think I'm crazy enough to kill

It's funny how you laugh at me
But you're never going to stop me
You won't ever break me
I'm weird, and it's lovely

Watch what you say
Revenge is so sweet
Just wait until the 'stupid' people are in a group
Then it's your turn to get beat

Go ahead and comment but plz don't be rude about it i work hard on my poems i just want to see how you guys like them.

I thought it was good, it's just very "high school". I don't really prefer stuff like that, but it shows that you put a lot of effort into it. Not bad though.

I thought it was great. kinda like how I feel every day!

It was okay. But this verse:
You know what, I don't care
I'm still going to be me
I'm not living in your world
Your standards mean nothing to me

Me and me don't exactly rhyme and your flow was off towards the end. Try reading it outloud after you write it and see what things can be cut out of it. Good poem though, it had a nice message. ;)

Good except for the last verse...it kinda made no sence.

"Watch what you say
Revenge is so sweet
Just wait until the 'stupid' people are in a group
Then it's your turn to get beat"

I didn't like that part.

:sigh:

deep heart ake belows in like an earht quake in the heart of a man , for how can i show them that this world will only reject them and in the end cause its own rejection

cursed in the begging by its own creator , that at the sacrifce could be an innersession for its dwellers made for love formed by mercy fallowed by bleading eturnaly .

we take our lives for granted replacing a lie for the status quoe , and in our ingroagance we are found happy , and will not be deturred .

how can i with one voice pearice the darkenss to show them the joy that they haved missed , to show them that u dont have the instruction book to fix the toy with in , given in to a broken world knowing nothing , how can i convence then that toys cant fix eatch other that knolalge by man can not be created , is only found and the lay at the mercy of a creator that just wants to let u know even if u do not choose him that he loves u

:sigh:

in deed varry deep sigh

INTENSE

i LOVED it. i have the same style of writing. keep up the good work.. id love to hear more.

mm it had an angry feel a bit rough but a good message coming through a rough diamond so too speak

i luv it.....