"Fate."

So I guess it's just us now.
Finally alone in your room now.
Do I have to shield my eyes?
Can I see you one last time?

I guess you wouldn't,
let me go.
I guess I was never,
on my own.

So I guess it's just me now.
Finally on my own now.
Do I have to say my prayers?
I wonder if you even care?

I guess you wouldn't,
let me go.
I guess I was never,
on my own.

i liked the repition you used. i also enjoyed the rhythm of it.

Um....yeah....I don't really get that poem. Do you think you can clear it up for me? Tell me what it's really all about? If you can't explain what it means....then it's not something you can really hook yourself into. I just want to let you know that. Hey....I'm Silencehurts, if you haven't checked out my poem yet, I would recommend you do and tell me what you think about it. Overall, it was a pretty good poem, just make a few changes on it.


:mnkymoon: <-----------see the monkey? see it grooving? that's me!!!!!!!

To Silence Hurts, this isn't an actual hard song to understand. Not all writing has to be the cookie cutter, tell-all in a verse writing. Zach's has hidden depth to his work, as you will also see if you read any of his other stuff. You have to sort of just think deeper when you read this.

Oh and Zach? I liked this alot obviously lol.

lol.

Konstantine pretty much summed it up.

It's a song by the way.