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fairys_wings
06-12-2004, 10:42 PM
Fill free to comment, I just felt like writing so I came up with this poem. Hope yall like it.


MORNING
Over the horizen comes the sun
telling us of all we'ev said and done
The wind wispers in my ear
letting me know I have nothing to fear
As if telling me of the coming day
the suns ray touches me as I lay
The warm grass between my toes
Slowly and steadly I start to doze
dreams await me in my sleep
ones that i'll surely keep
but that will have to wait till tonight
till all the days work is out of sight

some things may be misspelled but, hey i'm not perfect!:cool:

Alix
06-13-2004, 12:42 AM
Thats actually not bad. I really like it!

fairys_wings
06-13-2004, 04:14 PM
THANKS!



In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life; It goes on. [COLOR=royalblue]