:eek2: ;] :lmfao: :hawhaw:

Lol******
so im going to just write something out and you guys tell me if im meant to be a poet
i think it has to ryhme,nahhh lol

Blue

I wake up everyday..feeling blue
There's A part missing with out you
my head is spinning..i am so confused
what i thought i gained i did lose
im in trouble im not sure how to let it go
how do you tell someone you love them,when they know
my heart is aching and it just wont stop
i never thought it would hurt but it does alot
tears stream down
unsuspectingly
i glanced there my eye lashes tearfully
im smart enough to know
what wont happend
i cling to something that wont cling back
the statement withstands as a fact
i use to laugh and play
now i cry everyday
i dont know what happen to me
i lost myself
before i had time to see
it has come to a solid end
were my heart ache started
now has ended
everyday the sun brings a cloud
and it leaves me feeling
blue..:eek2: :lollipop:



(wow thats sounds bad)it took me a few mintues just to think of that ,lol get as harsh as you want because i really want to know how i did

Because ive never written a poem before is that even a poem?:cutie:
-kayz

sorry about errors too

stop being so hard on yourself! that was a really good, quality poem. its not perfect but i enjoyed reading it, it had a nice flow, meaning, vocabulary. just a good poem.

thnkz:)