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ImaGhost
12-09-2006, 10:12 PM
Because I feel like posting a few, and some more as I write 'em. First off, a love poem because everyone who writes poetry writes one at some point.;)

My love is my yin
Dark and divine
My hate is my yang
Light and benign
Together they combine
Half and half of one
Like night and day
Of moon and sun
One cannot exist
Without its other
Like light and dark
Or child and mother
When a half is gone
The soul is ripped in two
That is what happens
When I’m without you

smiley-28
12-09-2006, 10:27 PM
its cute i like it

Rockinlidie
12-09-2006, 11:38 PM
good poem. :goodjob:

false_revolution
12-10-2006, 12:19 AM
It's cute. The rhythm is wierd is some parts, but overall it's not bad.

rashied
12-10-2006, 12:37 AM
Nice. Better than my crappy poem skills.