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motosoho_2
12-09-2006, 07:46 PM
plz read my poem and tell me what you think about it!

???Why???



Tell me if there is a reason why i feel this way?
Why do i feel empty and lonely?
Is there something wrong with me?
Why is there a burning passion with nothing to feel?
Why am i never assured?, at times i feel worthless, and like a big hole waiting to be filled.
Why is there nothing exciting in my life, i dont have ligit friends?
Did i do something wrong?
Sittting home and daydreaming of what i wish would happen is to far fetched!
Why do they just look at me and never speak?
Why am i like a mirror?, all they see is my body and dont see beyond.
When i do have a chance i throw it away.
Why, why am i this way?
They love my imperfections and that's all they seem to see!
Why do i have a phone and it never ring?
Why all through my life all i do is cry about not ever having a conversation with........

Never-Named
12-09-2006, 08:08 PM
ahhh scary.. i loved it, yetit had no rhyming or ne thing. I really liked it cuz it prolly just relates to me. But very good.

cailieliz
03-25-2007, 07:13 PM
plz read my poem and tell me what you think about it!

???Why???



Tell me if there is a reason why i feel this way?
Why do i feel empty and lonely?
Is there something wrong with me?
Why is there a burning passion with nothing to feel?
Why am i never assured?, at times i feel worthless, and like a big hole waiting to be filled.
Why is there nothing exciting in my life, i dont have ligit friends?
Did i do something wrong?
Sittting home and daydreaming of what i wish would happen is to far fetched!
Why do they just look at me and never speak?
Why am i like a mirror?, all they see is my body and dont see beyond.
When i do have a chance i throw it away.
Why, why am i this way?
They love my imperfections and that's all they seem to see!
Why do i have a phone and it never ring?
Why all through my life all i do is cry about not ever having a conversation with........


I loved the emotion your peom gave. do u really feel that way. i know what your talking about. Jesus healed me and he can heal u too. if u want to talk about that with me please contacy me asap.