This forest I walk
This deep elder forest I walk through
reinventing the Gods and
upholding the myths of the ages.
These days were spent willowing away
walking beneath the Moon
where I sit, What I see
the music and flames surround me
we swim to the tide
we swim to the moon
nothing holds us back
breathe...


lyKe wut dya thInk?!

dont fucking type lyKe DiS because that is why no one reviews your poem.

the ending is too sudden to enjoy. it also lacks an easy understanding or even a deep meaning that is findable

The "lyke wut dya think" part at the end there was a joke, champ...way to catch on ;)

I'll have to admit tho, this is one of my more weaker writings..wrote it back in september and since then I've filled up over 50 pages in my notebook and writings and shit, I started writing anyways around august so..it's basically a rough sketch of everything to come.

but thanks for your opinions, and whatnot. I'll probably end up fixing it up later, I just have so much more to write before I change anything around.

5-10

well it did suck, whatever. Lol.
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