Haven't posted a poem in a while...this is one of my favorites

You've put you're self somewhere so remote
Every trail, leading there, remains unknown
Every path, that I pass, covered in snow
Are you ever coming back?

A third lonely winter with you away
Distance bring the decline and the decay
Skies are painted a tragic grey
You've retreated far beyond my way

There is no sun
No glory for those who run
Your day is done
But without you, mine has just begun

Tried so hard, to follow your steps,
But on my journey, bravely searching, I lost track
I wish I could have all that I lack,
Maybe then you'd come back

You've boarded yourself up
Alone with your mouth shut
Never saying everything you felt
Now you're waiting it out, till the snow melts

The snow will never melt.

Winter won't end in your world.

As you poorly play the hand you were dealt.

nice poem i realy like it

every body's heart has a remote corner of happiness and love...and winter

You've put you're self somewhere so remote
^^ incorrect english... yourself. you're is a contraction for you are.

too many unnecessary commas in the first stanza. its an eyesore

the second stanza starts bad. distance brings, or distances bring. choose one. they can not both be singular words

the rhyming scheme is pourous and inconsistent. the rhythm is like reading an EKG

the last three lines read as a seperate dialogue or note written by the narrarator to the subject in the poem. something should be done to make it appear more obvious. perhaps quotation marks?