And Then There Was One


And then there was one.
He stood bright as the sun.

With an all powerful gaze.
He looks back at the days.

Realizing his time was now.
Not knowing the who or how.

He cried for his loneliness.
The too deep pain only his.

Soon the sun would set.
At this he began to fret.

For his time has come.
The moon it would be from.

He knew that the one.
Would all too soon be none.

The darkness it did come.
And the moon's light burned some

As he was to die.
A tear rolled from his eye.

And then there was none.

This is a poem my brother wrote a year or two ago and I was wondering what people thought of it

I've heard many things simmilar to that before...it's ok, but I don't really like it...sry.

thanks for the honesty

Yes, too cliched. And the rhyming couplets get a bit annoying after the first few.

ummm... I've tink I have heard something along those lines also, I'm not usre where at the momet but I have heard somehting similar.


I know that this is soo completely random after that but I am random, so very random, PURPLE, but where/how did you get your avatar?? I would love to change mine from these petty ummmm..... how would you explain them, got it CRAPPY avatars

I made mine but you have to have a certain amount of posts to choose your avatar from files on your computer

no problem, honesty is my thing lol!