As the sky turns magnificent blue
I see you smile
Flowers bloom
I run to you
See you with open arms
I reach you
You take my hand
Whisper a faint "I Love You" in my ear
You pick a flower and hand it to me
You say this flower cant compare with your beauty
We turn, Me in your arms
Lost in each others love
As I Become Eternely yours

wow good wordchoice, quite percise and vivid indeed. good.

quite percise and vivid

very nice, i agree, great word choice

Not saying I disliked the poem, but I am curious as to what the poem had that included such a "great word choice"

"magnificent" "eternally" those are very good words...they are placed very well too, i mean, just read it...well, i liked it ;]

I like it, but it doens't flow rite. Good Job tho..