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AundreaLovesYou
09-30-2006, 10:23 PM
i am very sensitive about my poetry and songs, so dont bash it too much...suggestions are good tho..


I tried
To make your plans wrong
I lied
To your face more than once
I cried
Cause I don't want to be that kind of person

I'm sorry for all the things I did to hurt you
I recognize that now
I apoligize
Cause I can't take the blame away

I fight
When the battle can't be won
I might
Become your worst enemy
I'm not right
For the thousandth time in my damn life




(okay, yeah, it kinda sucks, but it is intended to be a song, and it would sound better sung)

rhetoric_a
10-02-2006, 01:17 PM
everything sounds better when it's sung