You are the one I first true loved
You are the one that ment to me all the above
The way I look at you is the way I think we should be
And I wish you had that same look for me
You'll be the one i'll always love
So i'll think of you always and above:pink:

nice.

short. doesnt really make sense.

short. doesnt really make sense.
:iagree: Um, if it just came to you, and you wrote it down so quickly, then I guess that explains why I can't really understand it. But if it took you more than 3 minutes to write that, I really think you should move on to something else that lets you express yourself.

i dont thinck theres enough soul in it.

yupp not enough soul in it make it longer say it better, put more excitement in it