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sexysweetheart91
08-20-2006, 10:15 PM
Every day I go on without you
and every day it hurts a little more
Every day I Cry for you but you never hear me
I look at the pictures of you and me
I miss that smile
I miss that laugh
I miss see you
I miss hearing your voice
I miss you


What you think?
Anna:pink:

a_pOeT_in_DIsgUise
08-20-2006, 10:24 PM
ehh i didnt really like it, sorry just not my style
just keep trying ;)