I think its time,
I finally laid my pen,
To rest.

Everytime,
It graces paper,
Someones upset or offended.

I cannot take,
The pain it inflicts,
Anymore.

We've had our fun,
Over the years,
How I've vented,
So much emotion.

The last thing I wrote,
Caused so much confusion,
Questioning of feelings,
I don't want to feel like,
When I write something,
I'm scared it will offend.

For those whome I love,
You've been my inspiration,
Throughout the good,
And the bad.

For my peers,
You've supported me,
From my first,
To this.

To every critique,
Thank you,
For opening my eyes.

I think its time,
I finally laid my pen,
To rest.


*Its true, this is to be my last poem, thank you.*

Cant believe ur not writing anymore. u helped me write before. u write some really good stuff and i know it. well was good while it lasted luke. C yew soon x x x

thank you.

wait you stopped before i had a chance to see your writting. I want to see this controversy. Anyways, i think that you need to rethink your reasons for stopping writing. You shouldn't stop because you provoke emotion in others. That's what writing is meant to do right?

I can't believe you're not writing anymore. But you had a great run.

wait you stopped before i had a chance to see your writting. I want to see this controversy. Anyways, i think that you need to rethink your reasons for stopping writing. You shouldn't stop because you provoke emotion in others. That's what writing is meant to do right?

what controversy ? lol

i know thats what its all about, but i provoked tohe wrong emotion in someone i really care about.

i duno, if i dont stop, then im having a long long break.

Don't stop, you can still write without showing your stuff to us.

Nah. A break is good for writers. You can come back, reread what you have written and decide, objectively, where to go from there.

^ agreed, but more than likely, it just wont happen again.

Don't stop, you can still write without showing your stuff to us.

good point.