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Xaritix
07-19-2006, 12:37 AM
I am basing this on an idea I had since I was like 12, about a race called the S.N. Empire (because of fear of my idea being stolen, I will not say what S.N. stands for), in my current idea for them, they have the technology of 21st century USA, but they have no space travel or anything, so I will advance their technology, for this fanfiction, by about 2000 years (they have already been around as a society for about 5000 years)

I will try to complete it in one night, but I may just complete it in parts, I will play it out like a movie, but here is a synopsys of the S.N. Empire:

The S.N. Empire was, acording to records, established some 3000 years ago (5000 years ago in this scenario) and have eventually conquered their entire planet, but were formerly constricted to an area of their world known only as "the archipeligo", they speak some basic, but their native language is known as "shiaa". The S.N. is a warrior culture, all their soldiers are female, and the whole government is run by females, and are led by one empress, men of their species are forced to "donate" to sperm banks

S.N. have bright green eyes, naturally red hair, they are around 7 feet tall, they have thick russian-sounding accents, and are very skinny, can be generally characterized as having the body structure of Nicole Richie, the S.N. are very violent, they always carry around a schimitar-like sword known as a "suura", their weapons are like modern guns, they shoot bullets and stuff, their soldiers do not have body armor, they have kahki pants with bullet-proof jackets, which can somewhat block laser bullets

The species of the S.N. is very phisiologically advanced, they can survive on even the smallest amount of oxygen, and are resistant to gasses that could kill a human being, but are very allergic to alcahol

The S.N. Empire expands over the S.N. home world and its solar system of 3 other planets, including 10 moons, they have a population of about 100 billion, and constantly search for places to colonize, considering other planets of the S.N. system are uninhabitable

The S.N. military has a fleet of around 100 "Kala class ships" which are around 1 mile long, cylindrical, and a death star like laser cannon capable of turning an entire planet into a desert wasteland, the "Kala Class Ships" also have an array of gun turrets on either side along with docks for fighter ships, which look alot like modern day jet fighters, except shinyer, and their ground forces, odly, include modern day looking tanks!

I will put the first part in the next reply as soon as possible

Xaritix
07-19-2006, 12:58 AM
A patrol of 10 ships from the New Republic is patrolling the outer rim, suddenly, an S.N. ship appears out of cloaking, the Captain of the Republic patrol, Kal Orvar, orders a hailing frequency, then the image of a S.N. woman with a black beret appears on screen

Kal: "Who is this?"
S.N. Captian: "Captain Xasl Ara of the S.N. Empire"
Kal: "I have never heared of any S.N. empire..."
Xasl: "You challenge us to battle?"
Kal: "No, no, no, that is not what we want"
Xasl: "We seek territory for our Empire"
Kal: "Yes well this is Republic Territory"
Xasl: "What is nearest planet?"
Kal: "That would be Hoth, 1 lightyear west of here"
Xasl: "Thanks you, Republic Traitor"
Kal: "I take that as a threat"
Xasl: "You oppose our intentions, [shouting] Xala, Ida na kir...pola"

The cannon on the ship fires a laser that completely vaporizes one of the ships, the ship turns 90 degrees, and the turrets fire on the patrol, destroying all the ships, except for one, which escapes into warp drive (or whatever its called), the S.N. ship then moves west toward Hoth...

How do you like it so far? I will release it in parts probably