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kingcobra42
06-24-2006, 11:22 PM
My clothes have become red with blood,
spewing out in a horrendous flood,
everyone is watching. All those eyes that are staring,
to look at what's wrong. Now that would be daring,
I build up the courage. It's not a pretty site,
Oh shit! I knew that tampon didn't look right!

LiLEvL01
06-25-2006, 06:55 AM
Hey thats really gd

kingcobra42
06-25-2006, 01:44 PM
thanks

xxxhot-angel
06-25-2006, 06:45 PM
haha funny
u should put that in jokes to
lol

Cuduxle-Filth
06-26-2006, 10:22 AM
...At least it rhymed.

goodguy
06-26-2006, 07:15 PM
im guessing its morte for joking and shock value then an actual attempt at a literary piece.