UNTITLED

I don't know why
I don't know how
i guess your one special guy
The way you look
The way you act
Your like one interesting book

here's the rest of ot


I just want to get to know you
And you to know me
Maybe we will connect too
But if not that's fine
We'll be friends
Til the end of time



I wrote this about my best friend(who is a guy) and he means much to me!!!!

SORRY HERE'S THE REST OF IT

I just want to get to know you
And you to know me
Maybe we will connect to
But if not that's fine
We'll be friends
until the end of time

sorry my computer is being stupid the last thread was put there twice

That sucks. Go away. Stop writing.

yeah. I have to agree. Not the greatest......

lol!

please stop writing here....

hey is ur name amanda taylor????? cuz if so then i know u!!! :eek:

no my name is not amanda taylor
my signature says Janelle!!!!!

it isnt that good. Other words: it sucked

I didnt like it... I'm sorry

i liked it

I don't care if you guys don't like it because in order to like it you have to have a connection with what the poem is saying. so thanks for your honest opinion

Well actually I didnt even read it. I couldnt be bothered. :shrug:

I didn't like it, it wasn't creative at all. All you did was try to rhyme words together about a guy. Don't stop writing though, if you really love it...it takes time and as you write you grow. (sounds korny..but seriously) write about what you're truley feeling, not words that go together.

I'm sorry that poem made me want to cut my head open and remove all memories of ever reading it.