you exposed my heart,
ot things i never knew i had,
brought out the best int me,
thigs i didnt know i could do.

all those places i go,
i see your face,
i hear your name,
everywhere, reminded of you.

from just one glance,
i have confidence,
to conquour the world.

from just one kiss,
i have the ability,
to fly away.

with just one touch,
from your soft, smooth skin,
you send my heart,
into relapse.

there is no feeling,
stronger than that,
of mine for you.

i love you.

you exposed my heart,
ot things i never knew i had,
brought out the best int me,
thigs i didnt know i could do.

all those places i go,
i see your face,
i hear your name,
everywhere, reminded of you.

from just one glance,
i have confidence,
to conquour the world.

from just one kiss,
i have the ability,
to fly away.

with just one touch,
from your soft, smooth skin,
you send my heart,
into relapse.

there is no feeling,
stronger than that,
of mine for you.

i love you.



I like the fact that i can feel your passion from the poem

Now please don't think i'm being mean, But try to stay away from Romance poems. I know that this is another way to express your self, it's just that some people cant really perfect the poem that is romance. But, yours is one of the better poems that i have read


Good job! :)

thank you :)

im not normally into the romance side of stuff - mines usually darker etc etc.

but im just so totally in love with this girl atm shes all i think of, so recently ive been doing more and more of the romance stuff.