Gonna Party On

Boy, whatchu think I'm talkin' 'bout?
It's you, boy, I wanna shout
I used to love the way you'd dance
Oh, I liked those sexy pants
Remember, boy, when we were twelve?
Those days were sweet
But now my life feels more like hell
I think aboutchu all the time
Butchu aint here no more...
Only in my mind
Guess what, though?
It's time--
That I leave you behind
Yeah, Yeah

~We gonna party on

Don't know why you took so long
Only liked me wearin' nothin' but a thong
Only liked it when I gave you pleasure...
Yeah, we talkin' "Billa-bong"
But those days are gone
Now everything's went wrong
But still

~We gonna party on

Mmm-hmm, we strode right in that club last night
Surprisingly, everything felt oh so right
Shakin' my a** in that skirt you liked
Yep, that that thing was awfully tight
But I wore it all just for you
There was nothin' that I wouldn't do
Ha...that's what got me in this mess
Caused all this pain, and all this stress

~But we gonna party on

I'm gonna live how I want
This world is all we have, you know
What were ya thinkin'?
We only got one life
We better make that two
Because this one's all f***** up now
Got me fed up when you'd lie
Made me angry, made me cry
Made me sad when you got high
Well, I have some news for you:

~We gonna party on, without you

Just one last thing, baby boy...
Go to college gain some knowledge
And live your life right
Smile for the cam
You know you want to
I sure am.

totally not my kinda thing - but not too bad.

Well, thanx, I guess.
I thought I'd try something new. I usually do, uh...DIFFERENT poems/songs.

My_chemical_emotion: Do you right or play any music?

I like it. It seems like a dif. kind of EMO.

Good!

Sank you:) This type of writing is a bit new to me, I'm glad you liked it, though.

Defintely more like a dance/hip-hop/rap song. It's swift and sharp and language is informal.

As far a poetry goes, it's too forthright for that.

Defintely more like a dance/hip-hop/rap song. It's swift and sharp and language is informal.

As far a poetry goes, it's too forthright for that.
Yes, I'm aware that it isn't very poetic. Like I said, I thought I would try some new flavors of style in my writing. It's very informal, as you said. That's how I wanted it.

It's supposed to be a song, not a formal poem, btw.

Is that even English? I shudder to think what it must sound like. :eek2:

If you wrote that though, I must say that's a bit of talent there.

It's very informal, as you said. That's how I wanted it.
Sure, was just pointing out that if you are classing that as poetry("I usually do, uh...DIFFERENT poems/songs"), that'd be a very inaccurate classification.

I'd also like to take this time to point out that this is a Poetry and Literature board.

no prob.

rhetoric_a, don't worry about it. If their is a prob. the MODS will handle it. lol

Sure, was just pointing out that if you are classing that as poetry("I usually do, uh...DIFFERENT poems/songs"), that'd be a very inaccurate classification.

I'd also like to take this time to point out that this is a Poetry and Literature board.

Whoa, just chill. I don't want you to get upset about it or anything. I'm sorry if you don't classify what I wrote as a song (which is a form of poetry). But I do. Where else should I have put that? The Music section?(although, I'm pretty sure that talks about celebrities)lol
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i liked these lyrics;)
sometimes it made me laugh:)

i liked these lyrics;)
sometimes it made me laugh:)

Ha...thanx. :flower2: Yeah, if you've seen some of my other poems/songs, you'll find that "Gonna Party On" is quite a change for me. But I've gotten back in my groove, so to call it, by writing some more of my usual "formal" songs.
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Is that even English? I shudder to think what it must sound like. :eek2:

If you wrote that though, I must say that's a bit of talent there.

Thank you(...that was a compliment, wasn't it?)
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:pink: "Why'd you get me in this mess
All this pain
All this stress
Take my heart
Sew it tight
And leave me here to cry at night.
~Now hand me YOUR heart
Keep it still
Let me touch it for the thrill.
There must be love to show affection
Don't hold back
'Cause that's rejection" :pink:
--CuteDancer92 & ReeBee8boi

when she was 8 her mom remarried
when she was 9 her stepdad raped her
when she was 10 she started drugs
when she was 11 she was a daddys girl
when she was 12 she began to drink
when she was 13 she changed
when she was 14 her dad died
when she was 15 she died to

do u like it?????? rate it plezzzzzzzz

don listen to them girl they don kno- i like it

My_chemical_emotion: Do you right or play any music?

indeed. i write songs/poems play bass/kinda drums(but badly) and learning guitar. why do you ask ?

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

GAY

indeed. i write songs/poems play bass/kinda drums(but badly) and learning guitar. why do you ask ?

Just curious. Iwas wondering cause I haven't seen you post any of your songs. I think you should.

indeed. i write songs/poems play bass/kinda drums(but badly) and learning guitar. why do you ask ?

Just wondering. :blah2: I was curious because I don't think I've seen them posted here. I think you should share them...

Sorry, I posted that twice.