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smells_like_failure
05-06-2006, 10:16 PM
Okay here is my new poem written last Wensday. Called The New Cult Classic
Our hearts could beat as one.
Our souls can form an alliance.
But if it comes down to this.
If I have to destroy you I will.
It's like Spider-Man Vs. Superman.
The cutter Vs. the knife.
Me vs. your hand.
So write this on the wall.
Scream it down the hall.
Tape this to your heart.
Recite this so it gets stuck in your pulse.
Your my favorite weapon.
All in my possesion.
I made you my number one mission.
The new cult classic.
Which will last for generations.
It will be an undergroud sensation.
Hand & Hand.
Side by side.
We'll never have to ride and hide.
But love is like a film.
It doesn't last the test of time.

crazy_lyrics1990
05-08-2006, 04:22 PM
that was awesome! you have an amazing way with words!

tatachka
05-08-2006, 05:18 PM
'Hand & Hand.'

did you mean 'hand in hand'??? or maybe not, lol.
Other than that really good poem.

chuck
05-08-2006, 08:52 PM
OK poem. You use to many of these "hand and hand" "cutter vs. knife"

It gets a little bit annoying and boring

im not trying to be an ass, im just a critic.

good thought process though.